wich series did you people prefer ? those have so many resemblances, hard to not ask the question.
I totally prefer the Sylvia Day Crossfire series. The writing is WAY better. I think the story is better too - the characters are more believable. For me, EL James invoked the odd image that I found appealing, but I think all the good stuff could fit in less than 50 pages.
I couldn't decide whether her repetition of the same words and phrases was her trying to use it as some kind of hook, or just really bad writing and decided it was the latter. I know that it started out as fan fiction, but that is no excuse for really poor writing. I blame the publisher - if they are charging such high prices for their books (particularly the electronic versions), they should have, invested in decent content and line editors and a thesaurus.
I toughed out the EL James only because I was listening to the audio version, whilst doing other things, so I didn't really feel I had wasted my time, just my ability to tolerate the expression "oh my". I wouldn't have made it through even the first chapter if I tried to actually read it.
Another point on the negative side for EL James is how she portrays kink. In this case, I think she is the poster child for "a little knowledge is a dangerous thing"
Bottom line, I recommend Day and tell people not to bother with James.