[simon_owl]

Penultimate paragraph, line three: "season" was removed

[rflash8]

Paragraph 10, 1st line: Original "snow" was changed to "snows".

Paragraph 1, line 3

Original: ornaments
Edited: ornements

Paragraph 13, Line 2
Comma missing after the word "me" in edited version.

[hija]

Beginning of paragraph 14 in original version is "As"
And edited version is "And"

second page, fourth paragraph, added an exclamation point ("!") at the end of the quote.
( magical night --> magical night! )

Paragraph 5
The edited version is missing the exclamation point after "companion".

Paragraph 11
Original: Evergreenia said
Edited: Evergreenia asked

[HogwartsExpress]

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Paragraph 14, line 2

Original Cheer
Edited Cheers

Paragraph 7, Line 2
Original: town
Edited: towns

[rflash8]

Paragraph 2, Line 2:
Original: deep "within"
Edited: deep "in"

Paragraph 2, Line 3 - the comma in "Its branches rustled, and the.." was removed.

[Alessa9]

Paragraph 12, Line 1: “but” was changed to “and”

[lush]

Paragraph 4, Line 3:
"a top hat" changed to "the top hat"